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Friday, June 20 2014 - 12:00 AM
By: Neoriceisgood

Chapter 2

You guys ready for this?

4719: Pirate-Rob - Friday, June 20 2014 - 12:16 AM

NOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!
I think.

Man, that forest looks epic.

4720: Jet - Friday, June 20 2014 - 12:24 AM

My body is ready.

4721: hapiel - Friday, June 20 2014 - 1:13 AM

no

4722: Hurricane Ivan - Friday, June 20 2014 - 3:06 AM

I wait with bated breath.

4723: Bisected8 - Friday, June 20 2014 - 4:14 AM

Red-y, Freddie!

4724: re_curly - Friday, June 20 2014 - 5:58 AM

I wonder whose arc that is.
If the general setting hasn't changed too much, I would tend to think it's probably gonna be about Noah, but one can never know what Neorice is thinking.

4725: NPC villager #3 - Friday, June 20 2014 - 6:19 AM

I already know this will be epic. Who will we reunite with this time? Will it be 3? Tobi? Whoever it is, obviously NOTHING BUT HAPPY THINGS WILL RESULT in a place called "The Red Forest".

4726: giovanni - Friday, June 20 2014 - 8:34 AM

noah! say, burk's chapter lasted over 200 pages (and was quite satisfying). how long do you think this one will last?

4727: Zoomo - Friday, June 20 2014 - 8:52 AM

God I hope it's Tobi. Her arc was way more interesting than Noahs.

4728: RavThunderbird - Friday, June 20 2014 - 9:34 AM

Well, Tobi lives in a desert so it probably isn't Tobi. Noah lives in a city so maybe....

It could be Burk again but then he would just be trolling us.

4729: Neoriceisgood - Friday, June 20 2014 - 10:40 AM

@Giovanni

Nearly every single page of the next chapter is using the double-sized page format so the pacing/update rate should be a lot faster.

Because of this I *hope* to keep the next chapter under 150 pages.

4730: Droidette - Friday, June 20 2014 - 11:20 AM

@Everyone. It's Noah's, it says so in the Archive.

4731: pkrcel - Friday, June 20 2014 - 12:13 PM

Guys, the name of the page is NOAH, in the browser....

4732: whitemanPT - Friday, June 20 2014 - 12:36 PM

why red? there are other colors YOU KNOW?

4733: LuKo - Friday, June 20 2014 - 2:06 PM

Noah is the cool guy on Burk's five step (with four steps) plan to be a hero.

4734: Tom - Friday, June 20 2014 - 2:16 PM

Woooooooah.

Just.

Woah.

Very cool. And creepy.

Nice.

4735: Goblin Scribe - Friday, June 20 2014 - 4:20 PM

omigod I'm ready for this

4736: NPC villager #3 - Friday, June 20 2014 - 10:36 PM

Oh. Yeah, okay. Well, Noah is cool too... I think? He's the detective right? I don't remember him very well.

4737: teenMETHUSELAH - Friday, June 20 2014 - 11:51 PM

I am very excited. Am I as excited as I should be? ONLY TIME WILL TELL.

4738: Someone - Saturday, June 21 2014 - 8:49 AM

You have to take a break from the red forest every ten minutes or you'll ruin your eyes.

4739: phyrex - Saturday, June 21 2014 - 9:41 AM

so hum...by now ive understood neorice is covering multiple characters, but are these independant story arcs in a common setting or is there ties between each character ?

4740: re_curly - Saturday, June 21 2014 - 12:56 PM

I changed my mind.
I believe Neorice is gonna troll us all, and this chapter will be about Nobi and Toah, magical wonder-twins that hunt desert mice on an eagle while singing songs accompanied by an over-sized balalaika.

4741: Frozen - Saturday, June 21 2014 - 8:35 PM

AWW YISS

4742: Hapiel - Sunday, June 22 2014 - 4:55 AM

You hope under 150 pages...
That means that it will take a year before we would be able to get back to Burk, if not Tobi!

Do you plan to interconnect the worlds this time more?

10280: random person - Thursday, August 25 2016 - 1:20 PM

I think noah is my favorate, followed by burk, cas burk is burk and therefore, awesome
. the third feels boring...but maybe her story arc will become more interesting later

13564: w - Sunday, July 30 2017 - 7:53 PM

this is actually helping me with the upcoming ielts exam.


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