Wednesday, March 15 2017 - 12:37 AM
By: Neoriceisgood
Smelly adventures.
Well at least it ain't a typical fire, ice or water temple.
Unimaginative game designers tho.
Well at least it ain't a typical fire, ice or water temple.
Unimaginative game designers tho.
Don't get your hopes up Tobi, lights could mean an oncoming train.
"follow the light" said no main character ever.
It was a bad idea to read this while eating lunch...
That dungeon sounds... unpleasant...
Didn't three speak in static, though?
Let's hope there's a save point.
@Silver
I think the static is just when he says something. If i'm correct the ellipsis is just an awkward silence.
Where's an exit, there's a boss fight.
You should probably fix the typo in there btw.
Instead of "smelled like three"
It should be "smelled like there"
Took me a couple reads to notice it myself.
Tobi must never have heard the song that says:
"Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel/
Is just a freight train coming your way"
@Reader
I think it isn't a typo.
She is addressing Three. Probably needs a comma though.
"Y'don't want to imagine what the part based on the gut smelled like, Three, it was..."
Maybe. Commas aren't my strong suit.
+1 @Silver