Totally non-suspicious citizen loving Empire guards.
I guess I figured out what's going on. Maybe... probably not...
Oh hey, 300 pages. Wooh.
Oh wow, those guards are... different...
300 pages ftw!!!!!1!!one!!!!
they do not look normal...OMINOUS!!
I didn't know the Empire recruited Jawas.
His magic says "Hey Noah, the elves are nice and they're righ. The empire is pure evil"
This seems very similar to "broken age".
I thought about it, and I think Noah went to some sort of parallel universe. And Noahs universe can interact with this one in awkwardly distorted way.
Neorice, when did you develop a knack for creating creepy/corrupted versions of Empire guards?
their eyes look monsterous
and yay for 300th page!
Wait.... Is this some twisted version of Noah's memory?
Noah you're not very smart are you
Burk will get his 2nd turn approximately two chapters from now.
Hero Oh Hero generally centers around three characters, with a chapter dedicated to each of them.
It is much easier to follow the storyline in this fashion as opposed to flitting from one character's storyline to another every few pages.
Please consider giving Noah and the remaining character a chance. They have a lot to contribute to the story and their storylines really flesh-out the setting.
I knew it! Herman's evil! Shoulda killed him when you had the chance.