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Saturday, March 19 2016 - 3:29 AM
By: Neoriceisgood

Lacey's love.

Let's play gang up on the guard.

As usual, extra bonus page tomorrow!

8883: whitemanPT - Saturday, March 19 2016 - 3:51 AM

dont know who lacey is but i can say i already like him

8884: Bisected - Saturday, March 19 2016 - 4:59 AM

Lacey is best Lacey. =3

8885: Whim - Saturday, March 19 2016 - 8:28 AM

THE POWER OF LOVE

8886: Tom - Saturday, March 19 2016 - 8:28 AM

I like Lacey's appearance!

@Neo - I'm surprised you changed his delivery for his "love declaration", it was more exciting in the original comic.

8887: Neoriceisgood - Saturday, March 19 2016 - 10:35 AM

@Tom

I actually agree the old one was slightly better, but in terms of panel space I couldn't really pull it off. /:

If you look at the old page you'll see that I had quite a big panel reserved for that particular line, something I couldn't really do with this one without having to sacrifice another panel.

As you might've noticed with the reboot, I've been trying to be a lot more careful about keeping pacing strong. (adding superfluous content and greatly reducing length of previous scenes); sometimes that requires a biiit of sacrifice.

8888: Neoriceisgood - Saturday, March 19 2016 - 10:41 AM

adding should be removing* oops.

8889: Probably pixel - Saturday, March 19 2016 - 4:53 PM

and Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,
Will alllways love yooooooou,
will always love you!

8896: orangetree - Sunday, March 20 2016 - 11:16 PM

The stare across the room at panel 6...epic. The girl thinks they were having an intense moment...then Pablo crushes that thought in panel 7.

14319: W - Sunday, September 17 2017 - 6:24 AM

ohhhhh why did lacey say in the old comic???


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