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Sunday, April 21 2013 - 11:52 PM
By: Neoriceisgood

Conclusion

This is the final page.

I hope you enjoyed Burk's adventure.

3477: Bisected8 - Monday, April 22 2013 - 3:02 AM

What a story!

3478: Bynine - Monday, April 22 2013 - 3:42 AM

Roll the credits!

3479: Guest1234567890 - Monday, April 22 2013 - 4:15 AM

A masterpiece!

3480: giovanni - Monday, April 22 2013 - 6:30 AM

victory screen!

3481: Zoomo - Monday, April 22 2013 - 8:00 AM

An amazingly powerful ending. Full of action and adventure, a strip better than the the others. This ending one of the best I've read in a long time. -Zoomo

3482: Zeratanus - Monday, April 22 2013 - 5:10 PM

And the resulting pooplosion was so powerful it created the post-apocalyptic wasteland that Tobi's home is in~

Yessirree I've got this all figured out!

3483: Supernymous - Tuesday, April 23 2013 - 7:05 AM

5 Stars! But only 1 square of toilet paper.

3486: Hapiel - Tuesday, April 23 2013 - 11:12 AM

'I hope you enjoyed'
Sorry, not so much :(. The artwork is beautiful, but the story develops way too slow! In this whole chapter hardly anything happened except for the introduction of Bandit and Burk, and a hint that Bandit is looking for Burk. Spread over 40 pages!!

I liked the old comics better personally...

3489: Tom - Tuesday, April 23 2013 - 10:41 PM

I'm with Hapiel here. The pacing is slower now, and everything is just too silly.

The style of the older comics in terms of pacing and dialogue was much better.

3494: Neoriceisgood - Wednesday, April 24 2013 - 6:43 AM

@Hapiel & Tom

The old comic's pacing also lead to 2-3 year-long hiatuses.

3496: Tom - Wednesday, April 24 2013 - 10:53 PM

@Neoriceisgood

I think that there has to be a happy compromise between the old and the new - the old was good but lead to hiatus, but the new is short, but not as "meaty".

I also think that the old one lead to problems because you didn't have a solid art style, forcing you to re-do it many times. Also, you were juggling 3 massive storylines at once - you have just run with one of them, and everyone would've loved it. Seriously! Every story was unique in its own way.

14794: Zimriel - Thursday, November 9 2017 - 11:09 PM

'a masterpiece'

... said Burk, after arising from the outhouse seat.


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