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Monday, February 2 2015 - 12:00 AM
By: Neoriceisgood

Melty

For those wondering, that's Noah jumping in panel 8.
I didn't learn how to do proper motion lines until halfway through chapter 3. (Which is coming ridiculously soon btw. :3c)

Talking about soon, 5 updates this week again!

5973: Pirate-Rob - Monday, February 2 2015 - 12:03 AM

Don't worry, I think it's rather obvious he's jumping.

Ceil flashback!

5974: Bisected - Monday, February 2 2015 - 12:15 AM

If RE's taught me anything, he needs to burn that corpse right now!

5977: whitemanPT - Monday, February 2 2015 - 2:20 AM

In Noah's defense i wouldn't be to sorry if i found guys who tried to kill me dead

5978: Tom - Monday, February 2 2015 - 3:08 AM

Nice page.

Small nitpick:

- Typo on the penultimate panel. Noah says "to" instead of "too".

- Dat jumping. Neo, I'm surprised you got it like that, your animation effects are usually awesome.

5979: Neoriceisgood - Monday, February 2 2015 - 3:14 AM

@Tom

At this point in time I was still struggling a bit with non-straight direction movement; especially more minor subdued movement.

(Like for Burk I can use flash-step esque effects cause he's a badass .. but Noah jumping needs to feel kinda slow and .. not epic. I didn't have a good effect to really show that back when I made these pages.)

5982: Kiithnaras 3 - Monday, February 2 2015 - 7:48 AM

Listen, Noah, this is your subconscious. I'm gonna level with you here. You seriously need to pay more attention to your surroundings. Situational Awareness, I believe it's called. When you see a dead body, you should immediately be on alert for two things: Is it actually dead if it might be a potential threat when alive, and what in your immediate surroundings might have killed it?

Part in parcel of this is NOT WALKING FORWARD WITH YOUR EYES CLOSED, NITWIT.

5983: Neoriceisgood - Monday, February 2 2015 - 8:55 AM

@Kiithnaras 3

If you want a hero with situational awareness I suggest hiring Burk instead.

.. Or maybe Tobi, she's not half bad in my opinion. Well I'll let you judge that, in a surprisingly short time lol.

5984: RavThunderbird - Monday, February 2 2015 - 8:58 AM

My only complaint is that Noah magically knew that he was under the town hall...For all he knows he could just be somewhere in the city's sewer system, not to mention the fact that by this point all the readers have probably forgotten that the other stuff was happening at the town hall specifically.

Noah can get chased by sewer monsters now!

5985: Neoriceisgood - Monday, February 2 2015 - 9:43 AM

@RavThunderbird.

Occam's razor applies here. The elves were talking about escaping/getting out of there while referencing the kids in the town hall & the elf named Maus went to get the others.

This heavily implies that this parto f the sewer is either underneath or *very close to* the town hall.

Noah could be wrong obviously, but he made a fairly reasonable guess imo.

5987: Neoriceisgood - Monday, February 2 2015 - 10:27 AM

@Glitterborg

Comment redacted due to spoilers. :p


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