Monday, January 31 2011 - 10:09 AM
By: Neoriceisgood
Ramien gives in
After his longwinded and daring escape, Ramien decides to surrender without a fight.
What an anti-climax right?
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Peace out,
Guido Bos
Wow, That was unexpected, Love the plot though!
Hey, isn't it called "obsolete", you got a typo in there. Other than that, it's as awesome as always.
Spelling Gestapo time!
Panel 7: advice = advise
Panel 12: obselete = obsolete
*ahem* Now I'm wondering what Ramien's planning here. Is surrendering part of his escape plan, or is he just fond of being a prisoner?
Oh whoops, I thought I already fixed those mistakes, I guess I didn't save it properly when I did.
Fixed them now.
Totally unexpected! It's funny how the guards treat Ramien... have they done this before?
There must be a plan beneath all of this...
So what's his plan? To earn their gratitude by putting an end to the riot or to negociate their release?
It's obvious that King is a skilfull schemer. So it's not really a big surprise (or, at all) that he surrendered... But what's his real plan ?
I wonder if the guards are secret operatives for Ramien or not.
The top / back wall aren't pixeled, right?
It looks good for the back-wall, but not so much for the beams? Maybe because the back-wall is like a texture, while the beams are like objects.
So, suggestion: You might be able to save time by doing some background textures with the brush tool, etc, but I don't think it'll work for things with discrete edges and shapes. :v
Hm, i suspect that the King is still in command of the place and just pretends to be a prisoner here. The man behind the man, possibly.