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Saturday, August 13 2016 - 12:37 AM
By: Neoriceisgood

Detective.

Ey

10056: Katz - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 1:09 AM

Felix, no.
And Detective Guy Juliet... huh.

10057: Leo - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 2:41 AM

How did the officer get into the meeting in the first place? Are you /trying/ to make these guards look incompetent, @neoriceisgood?

10058: The_Squished_Elf - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 5:24 AM

So, I hope Noah about to have his powers discerned. Otherwise his apparent lack of magic could get interesting with this test :/

Also, mostly unrelated to the page - it seems to me that Ariara and Aude have similar temperaments, and, to an extent, hair. It makes me wonder if there's any relation between the two.

10059: The_Squished_Elf - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 5:39 AM

Also, I can hardly believe I only just noticed Professor Null's messy hair change D:

10061: Rolewood - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 6:58 AM

Your characters and plots are very interesting, Neo, but honestly... those cliffhangers suck.

10062: Pokemonster2 - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 7:21 AM

Can anybody tell what the picture is?

10063: Rot - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 7:41 AM

Are they testing their magic, or is the test itself magic?

10064: Ava - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 8:12 AM

Another cliffhanger. How unexpected.

10065: Personthing - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 8:32 AM

Wait, is that the same detective as in Mage Baron's castle, or does he have a twin brother?
And if it IS him, does that mean all three stories don't take place at the same time?
Gah.

10066: SomeUnregPunk - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 9:06 AM

ARGH! So many cliffhangers at the end of every chapter!

10067: Leo - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 10:36 AM

He /does/ have the same eyebrow raise in http://neorice.com/hoh_664

I had assumed it was happening at the same time as this, but maybe the timeline doesn't sync up at all!

10068: Jack Morgan - Saturday, August 13 2016 - 5:23 PM

Given Guy's... interesting smoke trick and check-in with Veda back in Heroland, I'd say it's possible that the Guy in Heroland is, in fact, some fake set up by Veda to spy on neighboring countries. I could be wrong, but I'm sticking with it.

Also, I like how Noah just walks around with his shirt half covered in blood and nobody bats an eye.

Also also, I feel like the Guy here asking around about a violent murder is foreshadowing some plot events for later.

10069: Bisected - Sunday, August 14 2016 - 5:09 AM

Maybe he has magical powers. It would explain a lot...


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